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dlplumer
Jul-20-2008, 08:09 PM
http://dlplumer.smugmug.com/photos/335323134_MAhuu-L.jpg

http://dlplumer.smugmug.com/photos/335324272_Usqsp-L.jpg

dlplumer
Jul-21-2008, 03:58 PM
Would appreciate some candid critique.

Thanks,

Dan:D

davidweaver
Jul-21-2008, 08:44 PM
Hmmm...It is not a great shot. It is a snapshot IMHO. I'd suggest getting lower to some subject and working with the splendid natural close-to-ground plants in that area.

Cheers,
David

dlplumer
Jul-21-2008, 09:12 PM
Thanks David. Appreciate your condor. :D

schmoo
Jul-23-2008, 03:23 AM
Hi Dan,

I love the name "Sonoran Desert." It brings up such lovely images.

You're showing us what the place really looks like: cacti, shubbery, steep cliffs and wide flatlands. I think to make them more effective, however, your shot should have a more defined and focused subject. I'm not sure what part to look at, unfortunately!

Hopefully you can keep getting out there and capture the desert in all its beauty. :thumb

Thanks for sharing!

dlplumer
Jul-23-2008, 04:42 PM
Hi Dan,

I love the name "Sonoran Desert." It brings up such lovely images.

You're showing us what the place really looks like: cacti, shubbery, steep cliffs and wide flatlands. I think to make them more effective, however, your shot should have a more defined and focused subject. I'm not sure what part to look at, unfortunately!

Hopefully you can keep getting out there and capture the desert in all its beauty. :thumb

Thanks for sharing!

Thanks Stephanie. Good coaching! :D

TristanP
Jul-23-2008, 06:07 PM
Your second shot would be much more dramatic if taken with the sun behind you or to the right side to bring out the texture in the rock.