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dragon300zx
Apr-19-2005, 02:47 PM
If you gusy get sick of these let me know. I just want to get better and I value the opinions on this board. Only one shot right now as I have to get to the lab to develop some film.

http://www.computerhelpmi.com/pics/leah14asmall.jpg

http://www.computerhelpmi.com/pics/leah14small.jpg

^^That one was the original I think I like the crop more though.

Nikolai
Apr-19-2005, 04:09 PM
I think I like the crop more though.I like original more... The space and the trees in the background are very important, they create the mood...
The crop is just "A girl by the tree". The original is "Wating for a White Knight" or something..

Just my $.000002

lukiedukie
Apr-19-2005, 04:29 PM
i like the original better too. in the crop you can't tell what she's looking at.

dragon300zx
Apr-19-2005, 06:18 PM
I like you guys. I liked the original more but figured everyone would complain about my composition having her so extremely to the right. Original it is then.

She wasn't actually looking at the tree or anything though. She wasn't even looking up she was looking straight ahead but I threw the camera to and angle to see what would come of it.

PeterGar
Apr-19-2005, 10:54 PM
The branches from the trees tell a story... gives it a "feel" that the cropped one doesn't.

Peter Dumont
Apr-19-2005, 11:16 PM
Hello Dragon !

I like your picture of Leah a lot.
Here is my take at cropping .
Also, I changed her Levi's into the colour of her sweater.

Bye,

Peter Dumont

adrian_k
Apr-19-2005, 11:58 PM
yeah, I'm with everybody else - the wider shot is better.

I admire anyone who can take pictures at odd angles - this shot would just never occur to me.

If you gusy get sick of these let me know. I just want
http://www.computerhelpmi.com/pics/leah14small.jpg

^^That one was the original I think I like the crop more though.